Writing Prompt: A Perfect Day
Today's Writing Prompt comes from eighth-grader Sophia Shi, who won a Silver Medal in the Scholastic Art and Writing Awards for her Personal Essay. Here is a small sample of her award-winning writing:
I want a day. A day to myself. A day with no chaos, errands or planning; a day with no one yelling at me, insulting me, broadcasting my inferiority to the world. Sometimes I want to drop everything . . . I want to forget what assignments I have due tomorrow or what I have to organize or who I have to face . . . I just want to sit on my bed or a sunny hill or a vacant park swing and think about nothing at all.
—from Optical Illusions by Sophia Shi, Grade 8. Silver Medal, Personal Essay/Memoir.
So for today's Writing Prompt, think about your perfect day. What would you do? What would you NOT do? Where would you be? What would you see, hear, taste, smell, and how would you feel? Write your answer in the Comments.
My perfect day would be me on a boat on a lake,tubing for an hour or two, and then sitting down with a good book.
Comment #26 | Posted by: Carly on January 02, 2012 at 04:01 PM
couldn't have said it better myself!!!
Comment #27 | Posted by: dragonangel101 on January 03, 2012 at 02:00 PM
I long for a day
Where there is peace and quiet
Where I can read.
I long for a day
Where time stops and there is peace
where none are busy
I long for a day
with a good book and a light
reading for hours
I long for that day
I hope, dreaming and wishing
I want, and wish. I long for a day
Where there is peace and quiet
Where I can read.
Comment #28 | Posted by: jadedragon128 on January 03, 2012 at 04:28 PM
My perfect day would be with my best friend at the beach by my grandmas cabin. The lake and beach are right at the clubhouse resterant which is an awesome place! The trees are so tall there and cover the whole place( execpt on the amazing golf course! )
Comment #29 | Posted by: camryn on January 03, 2012 at 08:03 PM
My perfect day is in the sun playing football
Comment #30 | Posted by: monkeybanana48 on January 06, 2012 at 09:33 AM
My perfect day would be in a very peaceful and quiet house all to myself. I <3 quiet.
Comment #31 | Posted by: Lexi on January 08, 2012 at 06:15 PM
My perfect day would be falling into a wardrobe into Narnia.
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Comment #32 | Posted by: Queen Lucy on January 09, 2012 at 09:02 PM
a perfect day would be the day I would find out I dont have to go to school no more
Comment #33 | Posted by: Calleigh on January 11, 2012 at 07:12 PM
my perfect day would be running a 100 meter dash around the track beating every single record.
Comment #34 | Posted by: techay on January 16, 2012 at 03:27 PM
MY perfect day will be a day without homework, little kids after me, chores, rain, puddles....A DAY IN THE WOODS! I could sit in treetops, climb up on mountains, explore around the ridge, and stroll down the walk. What a fine and perfect day!
Comment #35 | Posted by: Hamsterbiking5 on January 26, 2012 at 05:39 PM
MY PERFECT DAY WOULD BE WHEN I WAKE UP LATE I CAN GET A GOOD ENERGIZING MEAL THEN START MY DAY WITH A RUN/JOG/WALK THEN I CAN READ A BOOK FOR A FEW HOURS THEN I CAN RELAX AND WATCH A ROMANTIC MOVIE THEN I CAN GO ON THE COMPUTER AND DO SOME WRITING PROMPTS ON STACKS THEN I CAN HELP MY MOM COOK DINNER THEN AFTER I EAT GO CALL MY FRIENDS AND CHAT FOR A WHILE THEN I CAN START MY HOMEWORK AND GO TO SLEEP THAT WOULD BE MY PERFECT DAY!
Comment #36 | Posted by: dolphinbrain37 on January 28, 2012 at 11:41 PM
hello there,my perfect day would be everyone that didnt fit in was happy,so show the world how awesome you are,I dare you :)
Comment #37 | Posted by: dragon claws 180 on January 29, 2012 at 05:01 PM
my perfect day would be the same way it is everyday. i appriciate whatever the days bring me and i wish that the day goes exactly how it was ment to go
Comment #38 | Posted by: kaylee on February 20, 2012 at 04:11 PM
I would think about nothing at all,reading a good book,relaxing.I wouldn't want to be stuck in my boring house all day,being yelled at and just keep doing the same old things.I would be in the forest,under a tree,with nature surrounding me.I see green everywhere,hear nature,smell the fresh air,and feel definetely relaxed.
Comment #39 | Posted by: werewolfcat5 on May 29, 2012 at 08:12 PM